i am pleasue that everybody can give me a chance to make the speech to become the president of our university student. i come from xx university ,my major is finance,i studied communcite skills,football and so on ,in holady i come to HP make a market survey and orginzed a music match. i believe i have the ablity as the president for our students. firstly i will orgnize a football match to make our body strong and have a good health to study. secondly i will orgnize a spoken english speech ,through the match to make us intrest in english,and make our english arrive a hight score. if i become the president ,i will do my best to make our life more colourful. 大概就這樣了，謝謝各位了！

熱心網(wǎng)友

6--8分，字數(shù)不夠120， 如嚴格的老師恐怕兇多吉少!錯誤：university student（s);i studied communcite(/e,+ing) skills;in(on) holady;(to)make a market survey and orginzed (organize)a music matchas (to be/become)the(去the) president for our (us)students (+ union)to make our body(us) strong ,用our body指身體不符合習慣，－－to keep us healthy/fit; through the match ---through which we canto make us intrest(interested)and make our english arrive a hight score---to improve our English standard/level, hight (high拼錯)。。

熱心網(wǎng)友

我也只能說“同上”了。小問題一個:)

熱心網(wǎng)友

兄弟，我們哥倆水平差不多！！掛啦！！！

熱心網(wǎng)友

對不起， 我是個實話實說的人， 您的英文寫作水平相當于初中生。 想必您的漢語寫作水平也不過如此。

熱心網(wǎng)友

朋友,你每一句話都有錯誒...

熱心網(wǎng)友

8~20分