Teams require leaders, and people who create ideas, who develop ideas, and people whose role it is to comment and help improve plans. 第一個and 是否多余？或是否存在其他問題？

熱心網友

不是多余的。 第一個and 是用來連接teams... 和 people...這兩個大概念上的分句， 第二個and 是用來連接關于people的三個分句。例：The parents , and their three children, Tom, Betty, and Peter, are all good at music. 這句話中的兩個and 類似于你的句子, 都不能缺了。

熱心網友

Teams require leaders, and people who create ideas, who develop ideas, and people whose role it is to comment and help improve plans. 第一個and 是否多余？是或是否存在其他問題？ whose role it is to comment 中的it 去掉

熱心網友

我認為是第二個and多余了

熱心網友

Teams require leaders who create and develop ideas, and whose role is to comment and help improve plans.

熱心網友

是