Physical exercises With the development of economy and the higher lever of living, more and more people are gradually aware of the importance of physical exercises, through which people can get stronger and healthier, and have more power to study and work. Many studies show that people who do more physical exercises can live longer than those who are lazy to moving. There are so many methods of physical exercises, such as dancing, playing, running and jogging and like. Those who love music can dance with music rhyme; others who like challenge may choose playing, such as football or tennis; likewise, people who long for peace could just run or jog. Among these methods, I think I like dancing best, and playing is not bad. I often dance at home, usually the hall of my room. Sometimes I go to keeping fit central. I play tennis with my husband and friends, though my skills are not so good.

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樓主寫得不錯(cuò),用詞豐富,基本無語法錯(cuò)誤。我這里提出一些用詞用語有欠妥當(dāng)?shù)牡胤揭怨﹨⒖?1。Physicalexercises--Physicalexercise這里談體育鍛煉這一整體,不必用復(fù)數(shù)。 egradual ,throughwhichpeoplecangetstrongerandhealthier,--:Itcanmakethemstrongerandhealthier。這里用through作轉(zhuǎn)折并不算錯(cuò),但整個(gè)句子就太冗長了,不清晰。所以用:斷開,另起一句來解說。and前不用逗號。 osewhoarelazytomoving--th manymethodsofphysicalexercises,suchas--somanywayst ,joggingandmuchmore。12。withmusicrhyme--withmusic13。otherswholikechallengemaychooseplaying--otherswholovechallengescanchoosetoplayacompetitivegame14。longforpeace--preferpeace。longfor語氣有些太強(qiáng)了。 ehallofmyroom--inmyroom。hall是大廳,比room大。 skillsarenotsogood--I'mnotverygoodatit。

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有點(diǎn)點(diǎn)Chinese english的味道 但總體還是不錯(cuò)among these methods 最好換成of all the methods還有 usually in the hall of my housekeeping fit central 改為 fit-keeping center