To:WhomitmayconocernDearsirs,We,KoreaShipmanagers.HerebyconfirmthefollowingcrewwasintheemployofourshipwhichnamedWooallVictory,( ,055G/T,3400KW)from24thJun.,2004to6thJul.,2005.Pleasekindlyallowhisrequestforthetrainingofwatchkeeping.N :12,Jul.,1979 ’sYoursverytruly14th,Nov,2005

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1)注意拼寫:ToWhomitmayconcern("conocern"錯(cuò),To的后面不用冒號(hào)。)2)正文部分按照vivian的為正規(guī)行文用語。3)日期放在開頭的右上角。整篇行文:14Nov。,2005ToWhomitmayconcernDearsirs,We,KoreaShipmanagers,herebyconfirmthefollowingperson/seamanwasintheemploymentofourship,MT/MVWooallVictory( ,055G/T,3400KW),from24thJun。,2004to6thJul。,2005。Pleasekindlygivepermittancetohisapplyforthetrainingofwatchkeeping。Yourstruly,XXX(打印)xxx(手簽)XXXXXX(職務(wù))XXXXXX(單位名) :E-amil:(電話,傳真和電郵如果方便,最好提供。)。

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,Nov,2005TOWHOMITMAYCONCERNDearsirs,WearethefleetcontrolmanagerofaKoreanshippingcompany.HerebyconfirmthepersonlistedbelowwasemployedinourshipnamedWooallVictory,(Gro ,055G/T,3400KW)from24thJun.,2004to6thJul., a(他的職位名稱).Pleasekindlyprovidehimasecurityguardtrainingcourseasreqested. :12,July,1979 'sPassportno.:EA-E02BC01110801Thankyouforyourattention.Yoursfaithfully,________________

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We,KoreaShipmanagers,herebyconfirmthefollowingperson/seamanwasintheemploymentofourship,MT/MVWooallVictory( ,055G/T,3400KW),from24thJun.,2004to6thJul.,2005.Pleasekindlygivepermittancetohisapplyforthetrainingofwatchkeeping.我根據(jù)大意對(duì)主要部分作了些改動(dòng),最后一個(gè)詞watchkeeping不明白是什么意思,還請(qǐng)指教。

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我覺得就只有our ship which named Wooall Victory的which named 中間加上is就好`