題目：“請根據自己的理解以“the way you make friends為題寫篇作文,100－120詞

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As the world is developping all the time,there is one thing that will never chang for us。It is the way we make friends。When we make friend,fwe must put our heart to the person we want to make friends to。Only when we do this can we find a real friend。Maybe sometimes you would say a line to your friend,but it doesn't matter。Because if he is your real friend,he will forgive you。But sometimes we may also have some friend that is bad to us。And when we meet these person,we should keep away from them。Well,what we must always remember in our heart is that a friend in need is a fried indeed。Only in this way can we make real friends。實在想不出什么，就只能寫成這樣了。還有，順便說一下，三樓那個初三的同學。說實話，初三能寫成這樣實在是很不容易了。不過好像病句也不少～第二句應該是How can we make good friends,因為how to make good friends根本不是一個完整的句子，它根本沒有謂語，而動詞不定式是不能作謂語的。還有應該是in two ways,in the internet。a good way 應該要比a real way更好一些。還有一個很嚴重的語法問題~a little tradional that is to meet each other and to be good friends，后面的and應該去掉，因為to be good friends 是和前面的 to meet each other不是并列的~要用and的話就應該在and后面加個in this way。最后一句~believe in后面要接賓語~應該就這么多了，找個天使愛我，別怪我多嘴~忠言逆耳，希望你在高中后能更上一層樓！。

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Every people has his way make friends!