"Goldweeks".Asweallknow,"Goldenweeks"givemoreandmorepeopleleisuretimesspendingwiththeirfamiliesandfriends.butitleadstomoreandmoresocietyprombles.First,itleadstomoreandmorecommunications.....sencondly,itleadstomoreandmorepolutions....Theend,itleadsotherproblems....Myopinionsis"goldenweeks" poeplecangooutatdiffenttimes....yoursfaithfully.可能中間有些語法錯(cuò)誤。但卷面較整潔。請(qǐng)老師評(píng)分,謝謝!

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