1.如果你想多了解一些他家房子的情況，請寫信給我.More about If you wish know his house,please write to me.請問，我這么翻譯可以嗎？如果不行，請說出原因？？？謝謝！！！

熱心網友

不可以，首先MORE ABOUT 放在IF前面就不合適，應該是MORE ABOUT HIS HOUSE，另外WISH后面應該接TO，不能直接加動詞，你可以翻譯成 IF YOU WANT（WISH） TO KNOW MORE ABOUT HIS HOUSE，PLEASE WRITE TO ME 或者IF YOU WANT（WISH）TO GET MORE INFORMATION ABOUT HIS HOUSE，PLEASE WRITE TO ME

熱心網友

Please write to me if you want to know more information about his house.應把more about 放在know 后面。

熱心網友

If you want to know more information about his house,please write to me. know ...about 是固定搭配 information 不可數名詞不加s

熱心網友

If you want more informations about his house,please send me a letter.

熱心網友

If you need more information about his house,send me a letter please！

熱心網友

If you wish to know more about his house ,please write to me.

熱心網友

If you want to get more informations about his house,please write to me.