這樣翻譯正確嗎？

熱心網(wǎng)友

He goes all out in his work.He's absorbed in his work.He's engaged in this job with his heart and soul. He dedicates himself to the job. 表達(dá)方法很多，僅舉幾例。

熱心網(wǎng)友

Put all one's engry into it!

熱心網(wǎng)友

很好

熱心網(wǎng)友

我覺(jué)得"put all one's engry into it"更好一點(diǎn)

熱心網(wǎng)友

put more efforts on

熱心網(wǎng)友

put more energy into it

熱心網(wǎng)友

我覺(jué)得把"power"改成 "effort" 更好一點(diǎn)。Put more effort into it.