請各位英語高手幫我批改下我寫的英語作文，主題是關于2012年的倫敦奧運會 The Olympic Games in London The 30th International Olympic Games will be held in London. Why the London is the winner? Let me tell you. The first point,London advocate“Have a foothold in younger,deliver olympic\'s spirit” This point is very important. The second point, the Olympic Games was held in London. So London have a lot of experience and London\'s sports place is very good such as swimming pools、football playground、runway and so on So London could win the 2012 Olympic Game.請各位高手不惜賜教，小弟表示感謝啊！

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The Olympic Games in London With the clap and laughter flying around,London is the winner in the 30th Internatinal Olympic Games\' competition。 In consideration of London\'s success,there are three points cannot be ignored。 As is known to all, London is a gardon city。 When you step into the city, you will find yourself deeply attractted by the beautiful suroundings around。 Moreover,there are lots of standard stadiums and gymnasiums for Olympic Games,such as the swimming pools,football playground and basketball gyms。 In addition, several years ago, London used to successfully hold an Olympic Game。 Owning this cherish experience,London will surely hold a more wonderful one。 Generally speaking,Olympic is not only a simple sport, but another name for sports\'spirit as well。 In London, exercising has become a hobby in every child\'s heart。 So in the end, London become the holder for 2012 Olympic Game。。