I eager to improve my English,So I come out an idea, everyday I write some sentence in Iask,and please all of you correct me .Perhaps therehave a lot of mistake,but I believe that my English will have a great advancement with all friends help. Thank you first.

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IAMeager(fixede )toimprovemyEnglish,soIcomeUPWITH(fixede )anideaTO(it'seasiertoputitthiswaythan" 'llwritesomesentencesinIaskeveryday")writesomesentences(preferably"something"becausethatsoundsbetter,butyoucanuse"sentences"aswell)in(notsureabouttheprepositionhere)(forpractice)IaskEVERYDAY(putanyadverbialsattheendofthesentence)。WOULDallofyouPLEASEcorrectme?(seperatesentence,andusetheexpression"wouldyouplease。。。")PerhapsthereARE("therebe"expression)alotofmistakeS(makeagreement,"alotof"isplural,andshouldbefollowedbyanouninitspluralform),butIbelievethatmyEnglishwillhaveagreatadvancement(youcansaythatbutitsoundsreallystrange,preferably"IbelievethatmyEnglishwillimprovealot")withall(the/my-justsoundslikethereshouldbesomethingtomakeitsoundright,I'mnotsure)friends'(ifyouinterpret"help"asanoun,youshoulduse"friends'"tomakeitbelongtosomeone)help(or"withallthe/myfriendshelpingme"。ThankyouVERYMUCH(foryourhelp)。("thankyoufirst"issortofchinglish,youdon'tsaythankyoufirstorlastwhenyousincerelywanttothanksomebody)Hopeyou'lllikeit。Thewholethingwillloo ,soIcomeupwithanideatowritesomethingforpractice(in)Iaskeveryday。Wouldallofyoupleasecorrectme?Perhapstherearealotofmistakes,butIbelievethatmyEnglishwillimprovealotwithall(the/my)friends'help。Thankyouverymuchforyourhelp。

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Perhaps there are a lot of mistakes,but I believe that my English will have a great progress with all friends' help.

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,soicomeupanideathateverydaywritesomesentencesinpractice.