可能有錯誤,請指教: You of the level is in fact higher than me, because I am during the period of universitied to learn but can't write well, and you did not suffer the specialized training can however write so good. [你的水平其實(shí)比我高,因?yàn)槲以诖髮W(xué)期間學(xué)過而不能寫得很好,你沒受過專門訓(xùn)練卻能寫得這么好.]

熱心網(wǎng)友

我在這里忠心建議，似乎‘因?yàn)椤瘧?yīng)該去掉才通你的水平其實(shí)比我高,我在大學(xué)期間學(xué)過而不能寫得很好,你沒受過專門訓(xùn)練卻能寫得這么好In fact your level is higher than mine,though I studied it in the college,I cannot perform well now 。You do it so well even though you do not have special training。You of the level（此處不妥，英文中表達(dá)不通） is in fact higher than me（這里應(yīng)該用mine是指我的水平，不是我), because（這里因果不妥，應(yīng)該用讓步狀語從句） I am during the period of universitied（in the college就可以了，universitied這個是動詞應(yīng)該用名詞) to learn but（缺主語） can't write well, and you did not suffer（不能用Suffer這個詞只能用在遭受痛苦的時候，很明顯此處不行) the specialized training can however（只能用在句子銜接處不能用在這里） write so good（實(shí)意動詞后用副詞WELL）。我乃一孔之言望請賜教。。

熱心網(wǎng)友

我怎么看沒呢？